Hugo has been reading the teachers comments and trying to put the suggestions into practice. Wow I am so impressed you are working so hard on your learning. Well done Hugo on putting your spelling skills into practice.
Hugo, you have been busy! I always love seeing your writing. You are thinking about your sentences now, and how they fit together. Remember not to start a sentence with and. I also like the way you have started your sentences with a capital. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next piece of writing.
Hugo you are so amazing. I love that you have used all your fast words to create sentences. That is such a good way to learn to write these words and to make it all have meaning. You are very dedicated to your learning.
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Hugo, you have been busy! I always love seeing your writing. You are thinking about your sentences now, and how they fit together. Remember not to start a sentence with and. I also like the way you have started your sentences with a capital. Keep up the great work. I'm looking forward to your next piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteHugo you are so amazing. I love that you have used all your fast words to create sentences. That is such a good way to learn to write these words and to make it all have meaning. You are very dedicated to your learning.
ReplyDeletewow Hugo, what beautiful writing you have, and love the spacing of words. keep up the wonderful home learning. Rachel (teacher Aid)
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