Tuesday, 31 August 2021

Lexie and her dog

Check out this gorgeous photo of Lexie with her dog Phoenix. They are great mates and Lexi has even written a story about Phoenix. 


Lexi, I am so impressed with your story! I can see you have listened carefully and written down the sounds you heard. You even remembered your capital letter at the beginning of your sentence and a full stop at the end. Kai pai. 



3 comments:

  1. Great writing Lexi! What a lovely dog you have. I really enjoyed reading your story about Phoenix. Awesome effort writing all the sounds you can hear in the words. Well done!

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  2. Lexi, how clever to write about your dog Phoenix. What a gorgeous, gently looking dog, who obviously loves you a lot. Keep writing stories about what you are getting up to. I love to read them.
    Mrs North

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  3. Great work Lexi. You have a lovely dog there. I bet you get up to lots of adventures together. I look forward to hear more about them.

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