Today we made fruit kebabs. We used sticks, bananas, marshmallows and grapes. We wrote lots of words for our rich language experience. Tomorrow we will write about it.
These look delicious! I love the way you have labelled you diagram and used words that sound the same at the beginning (alliteration) squishy, squashy, slippery and sticky. I would love to see some of your good writing about this.
Hey Te Ope Ruaraki it is Miss Morgan. I really like seeing all of the active listeners. It is interesting to see marshmallows in your kebab! Did you think about using other fruit like apples or oranges? I wonder if everyone liked eating them?
Hey Te Poe ruaraki my name is Riley I like your fruit stick I wish I could eat it because it looks very delicious.you could tell us how you made it down the bottom?
Hi I'm Patrik in team Toi Toi. Those marshmallows looked delouses with the bananas and grapes.I saw in the pictures that you had cooked the marshmallows and pushed them on a stick. How did you make those marshmallows? Have a good writing time.
Yandra Te Ope Ruaraki. looks like you had fun we would like to try your recipe .how did you make this little thing .could you send us the recipe? By Aiden from team toi toi.
Yum! This is a great idea we love fruit and marshmellows too! We can't wait to read your writing. Which did you like the best? Grapes, banana or marshmellow?
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These look delicious! I love the way you have labelled you diagram and used words that sound the same at the beginning (alliteration) squishy, squashy, slippery and sticky.
ReplyDeleteI would love to see some of your good writing about this.
Hi juniors what a amazing experience! Did you like it? I like your brainstorm it looks awesome! Did you have fun? From Sophia
ReplyDeleteHey Te Ope Ruaraki it is Miss Morgan. I really like seeing all of the active listeners. It is interesting to see marshmallows in your kebab! Did you think about using other fruit like apples or oranges? I wonder if everyone liked eating them?
ReplyDeleteHello my name is Naomi I like that you took a photo of what you made you could work on writing what you made I wonder
ReplyDeleteHow easy it is to make one
Hi
ReplyDeleteYou made me feel like I was there.
From Liam - team toi toi
Hey Te Poe ruaraki my name is Riley I like your fruit stick I wish I could eat it because it looks very delicious.you could tell us how you made it down the bottom?
ReplyDeleteHi I'm Patrik in team Toi Toi. Those marshmallows looked delouses with the bananas and grapes.I saw in the pictures that you had cooked the marshmallows and pushed them on a stick. How did you make those marshmallows? Have a good writing time.
ReplyDeleteYandra Te Ope Ruaraki. looks like you had fun we would like to try your recipe .how did you make this little thing .could you send us the recipe? By Aiden from team toi toi.
ReplyDeleteHello from cadie I like what you made. how Did you make the kebabs.
ReplyDeleteKia ora, Harakeke class here from Hornby Primary.
ReplyDeleteYum! This is a great idea we love fruit and marshmellows too!
We can't wait to read your writing.
Which did you like the best? Grapes, banana or marshmellow?
Thanks, ka kite