Oh my goodness that cake looks delicious. It has so many yummy flavours in it. I can see you wrote your name in your favourite colour....orange. Clever girl. Are you as good at baking cakes as you are at drawing them?
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Wow! Awesome work Sofia and I love your headphones! Your cake drawing is fantastic and is making me hungry :)
ReplyDeleteThis looks fantastic Sofia, love the colours on your cake. What are you looking at on the laptop?
ReplyDeleteSofia your rainbow cake looks amazing! What a great idea to draw a picture about the story you listened to. Great job!
ReplyDeletegosh Sofia what a wonderful looking cake, did you get mum to make it for you
ReplyDeleteI love that cake Sofia, I love the layers, looks like a wedding cake! You are an excellent designer!
ReplyDeleteOh my goodness that cake looks delicious. It has so many yummy flavours in it. I can see you wrote your name in your favourite colour....orange. Clever girl. Are you as good at baking cakes as you are at drawing them?
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