Sunday, 30 June 2019

Writing about Shaving Cream

Mrs Jones put a small blob of shaving cream in our hands...

3 comments:

  1. I loved your writing! I also loved the look of your sticky, bubbly hands. You have made good sentences with similes.

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  2. Hi junior syndicate I loved your wiring you could have made your sentences longer from Sophia.

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  3. malo lele my name is Bella from team toi toi . I like your thing because it’s very amazing for me I wish that I can see more this week... from yaar 3s bella . I think it is amazing for me. you did it today. from Bella team toi toi I like all of it like all of it.

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