Thursday, 19 September 2019

Our Fabulous Writing

Every Thursday we have a picture to write about.
This is our picture prompt this week.


We are learning to use our "Eagle Eyes," write about what we can see, and use wow words.
Here are 5 of our amazing stories read out by each author - Emma, Max, Taylah, RJ and Nadiya.

I think you will be very impressed.





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  1. Wendy Huriwai22 September 2019 at 07:44

    I loved listening to your stories about the frog in the rain with a leaf up like an umbrella to protect him from the raindrops. You have done a good job using some wow words - describing the frog's colour and how the rain is coming down. Next time, you might tell me about how he is feeling or looking and if the rain is drizzling or stormy.

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